Those are all very valid points.
The element behind the main section was a copy of the logo icon I designed. I'm going to scrap that element anyway, as I realized just how much weight that single image would add to each page.
I've uploaded a new mock-up with some more color, a lot less gray, and I've exchanged the script for Calibri.
Comments on this new mock-up?
What do you think of my logo icon? Is it decent? Any suggestions on it? What about the font I've used to write "Ten-321 Enterprises"? Any fonts that are personal favorites of yours that might improve the way that looks?